Group: Feedback ideas

• After having our work reviewed a number of times we have been able to edit some of our action matches to ensure they cut on point at the time of action. We have had to do this a number of times for all of our action matches, however it has made a clear improvement to our work.
• On top of this there have been some shots that we have been told are not neccessary in our film, for example there was a shot which we had incorporated of the main character (Jake Nolan) getting dressed after waking up. But, this wasted time and was not an integral part of the build up of the story.
• Another piece of feedback we have received is the quality of some of our shots could be improved. For example in our final shot we used the zoom button on the camera to created a zoom out-to-establishin shot. But we were told this didn't look right using the zoom on the camera. So to rectify this we reshot the footage using a steady tracking shot.
• Our most important feedback and change to our work has been our ending. Originally we ended on a very depreciating anti-climax which doesnt leave any sort of a cliffhanger looming over the story. However we decided to change this to finish our story with a zoom out establishing shot showing the murderers lair with blood stained sheets to leave this final impression on the viewer.